1) Say “Yes” to the reality
“Yes” means you acknowledge what was established: the injury, the
crowd, the accusation, the weather, the awkward silence. You can
dislike it IC—you still accept it as true for the scene.
- Good: “He does look exhausted.”
- Not good: “No he doesn’t.”
2) Add “And” with intent
“And” is where you contribute. Add information, pressure, a
choice, a consequence, a complication, or a genuine offer of
help—something your partner can respond to.
- Good: “And the rain is making the road collapse.”
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Not good: “And anyway…” (then you change the subject)
3) Be generous with agency
Strong scenes are traded, not taken. Create openings. Ask
questions. Offer a consequence that invites choice instead of
forcing an outcome.
- Try: “Do you take the deal, or walk away?”
- Avoid: “You agree, obviously.”
4) Escalate, don’t erase
The scene should move forward. Don’t reset the stakes. Heighten
them responsibly: make problems clearer, not bigger for no reason.
- Better: “The guard recognizes your crest.”
- Worse: “A meteor hits the city.”