1) Say “Yes” to the reality
“Yes” means you acknowledge what was established: the injury, the crowd, the accusation, the weather,
the awkward silence. You can dislike it IC—you still accept it as true for the scene.
- Good: “He does look exhausted.”
- Not good: “No he doesn’t.”
2) Add “And” with intent
“And” is where you contribute. Add information, pressure, a choice, a consequence, a complication,
or a genuine offer of help—something your partner can respond to.
- Good: “And the rain is making the road collapse.”
- Not good: “And anyway…” (then you change the subject)
3) Be generous with agency
Strong scenes are traded, not taken. Create openings. Ask questions. Offer a consequence that invites
choice instead of forcing an outcome.
- Try: “Do you take the deal, or walk away?”
- Avoid: “You agree, obviously.”
4) Escalate, don’t erase
The scene should move forward. Don’t reset the stakes. Heighten them responsibly:
make problems clearer, not bigger for no reason.
- Better: “The guard recognizes your crest.”
- Worse: “A meteor hits the city.”